Monday, 26 February 2007

puddling snow
in the streetlight's circle
rising winds
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2 comments:

Area 17 said...

At first I read it as pudding snow which I really like and then read it as puddling snow which is a great way to avoid having a second verb.

An atmospheric haiku!

26 February 2007 at 15:11
Roswila said...

LOL! I've also read it as "pudding." It almost works, seeing how mushy snow gets while melting. :-)

Yes, it was quite an atmospheric view from my terrace window, as I wondered just when the snow those winds was heralding would arrive.

26 February 2007 at 20:08

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