Saturday, 17 February 2007

northern wind -
fine hail patters
on the shutter

vent du nord -
le grésil crépite
sur le volet

Thanks for your advices to improve my English or translation


Roswila said...

I can't help with translation. But I can say the English version is just fine. A very nice haiku.

Damien Gabriels said...

Thank you very much Roswila