Sunday, 18 February 2007

trusting
the snowdrops -
my new shoes

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice one Dana-Maria
john

Dana-Maria Onica said...

Thank you, John.

Anonymous said...

arent haiku supposed 2 have 5 syllables in the 1st and 3rd line and 7 in the 2nd line????????
Emma, 12

Dana-Maria Onica said...

Emma,
*the 5/7/5 is not a compulsory pattern
* the spirit is more important than the form
* I do not pretend that my poem is a haiku. It is a poem in haiku spirit.

Thank you,
Dana-Maria