At first I read it as pudding snow which I really like and then read it as puddling snow which is a great way to avoid having a second verb.An atmospheric haiku!
LOL! I've also read it as "pudding." It almost works, seeing how mushy snow gets while melting. :-) Yes, it was quite an atmospheric view from my terrace window, as I wondered just when the snow those winds was heralding would arrive.
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