Wednesday, 28 February 2007

traffic jam -
the wind turbine in the middle
of the rising sun

embouteillage -
l'éolienne au centre
du soleil levant


Alan Summers said...

I really really like this!

And your original French looks visually stunning, even before I actually read it.

My traffic jam haiku is quite different:

traffic jam
a driver fingers the breeze
through the sunroof

Damien Gabriels said...

merci beaucoup / thanks a lot Alan