Wednesday, 28 February 2007

traffic jam -
the wind turbine in the middle
of the rising sun


embouteillage -
l'éolienne au centre
du soleil levant

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really really like this!

And your original French looks visually stunning, even before I actually read it.


My traffic jam haiku is quite different:

traffic jam
a driver fingers the breeze
through the sunroof

Damien Gabriels said...

merci beaucoup / thanks a lot Alan