Saturday, 17 February 2007

northern wind -
fine hail patters
on the shutter


vent du nord -
le grésil crépite
sur le volet

Thanks for your advices to improve my English or translation
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2 comments:

Roswila said...

I can't help with translation. But I can say the English version is just fine. A very nice haiku.

18 February 2007 at 04:57
Damien Gabriels said...

Thank you very much Roswila

18 February 2007 at 08:00

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