Wednesday, 11 April 2007

cropped lawn -
slowly a daisy
raises head

pelousetondue -
un pâquerette lentement
redresse la tête


John McDonald said...

love this

jem said...

This strikes me as funny and sad all rolled into one. Great stuff!

Alan Summers said...

Hi Damien,

Good old sturdy daisies, and other flowers considered weeds! ;-)

What a fantastic word! pelousetondue

You might consider this version:

cropped lawn -
slowly a daisy
raises its head

Damien Gabriels said...

Thank you john, jem and alan (and many thanks for the improved version)

In fact, "pelousetondue" is pelouse tondue : an error of typing ...